Splashy Raining & Dancing Girl

Its Raining here :D

Splashy Raining & Dancing Girl

Hey! come up here come up here
Its raining here raining here
Lift your faces up towards
Droplets moving just towards
With closed eyes feeling peace
The moment just I wanna freeze
Inhaling nature with my breath
Moving inward at its bests
Striking sounds to my ears
Its raining raining Oh my dears
Its falling down with the joy
Dipping soaking like a toy
Droplets here catching attention
Creating peace & kicking tension
Lifting toes with these dances
Moving around with the glances
As dancing girl with rainy drops
She is feeling on the tops
Wanna go on longer drive
Longer the road longer the ride
Sprinkling droplets on the screen
Splashy water here you been
Foggy window with my art
I love them all by my heart
Splashy puddles by other side
Making surrounding full of pride
Oh dear rain please stay for long
As your falling sound is soothing song


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

You clearly marvel at the rain when it is kind enough to come down and cleanse us, and you should. There is something magical about the sky letting loose its moisture and drenching us in purity.

Wanna go on longer drive
Longer the road longer the ride

These lines called out to me above the others. Driving in the rain is so wonderful. You get to see the droplets accumulate on the windshield and reflect from the headlights. Beautiful.

[Eve Ola]

exactly you are interpreting what I really thought while writing. Thanks Ashira :)

[Steve L.]

Rain is one of my favorite things in nature. So many ways to interpret it! Well done.

[Eve Ola]

sweet, thanks Steve :)

[Tom]

We get so much rain here where I'm from, ( even in summertime ) it's all too easy to take H2o's life giving, replenishing qualities for granted, though you have penned a fine expressive poem of the rain and the joy it brings when it falls !

[Eve Ola]

sweet Thanks for sharing your words I do appreciate :)

[Mayank]

It bought back the child inside me, who used to love making paper boats and let them run on water logged roads... amazing.

[Eve Ola]

wow and I still use the same way even in my office . btw thanks :)

[Jennie Baron]

I'm musically oriented and this had a rhythmic, songlike quality, but of course rain has its own rhythm. I could almost hear the melody!

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Jennie :)

[Miss Owl]

A poem very well done full of the joy and fun that rain can be. A poem that brings a smile to the reader.

[Eve Ola]

aww then glad you smiled too :) Thanks a lot

[Miss Owl]

You are very welcome.

[Wandering Minstrel]

An original and rhythmic form! The thoughts invoked are moving. I like the style

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for stopping by :)