Sleepy Love Note - Miss You

Sleepy Love Note - Miss You

I love the way you love me
And the way you scold me
You are the reason for my breath
  Your smiles, yours hugs all my wealth
Whispering!
Will you please hug me once more?
Because I love you more I miss you more
Trying to sleep but alas! These eyes...
As missing your love palms, on my eyes.


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

Reminds me of my boyfriend. Really sweet.

[Kurayami]

This is quite a nice poem. I like how you show both the not so good side and the good side of a lover. It is really interesting.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for such a kind feedback :)

[Aprille]

I love it. The words are so simple and easy to understand. ".. I love you more I miss you more.. " :)

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Olive :)

[Aprille]

You're welcome. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing flow of thoughts in the words.
"Because I love you more I miss you more "
Sometime thoughts keep us from sleep. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Coyote for kind words :)

[anne]

feelings definitely indicate true love...well expressed.....

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for stopping by :)

[Luissanto]

Very eloquently written and a true expression of love...

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[Edward Lancheister]

sweet romantic poem with full of delicate love bind inside

i like the flow inside the poem

thanks for share

[Eve Ola]

and thanks for leaving such a kind feedback

[stars are far]

that was very warm and sweet, done well .
keep love hearts coming up ::)

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[stars are far]

my pleasure :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

and the warmth of it... reminds me of many missing moments...

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for stopping by :)

[Matching Socks]

Can feel the longing here in this one.

[Eve Ola]

:) .