Arguments With Mr.Right - Love Fight

Arguments With Mr.Right - Love Fight

Whatever I write, whatever I pose
Whatever I capture, whatever I said
Whatever I show, whatever I share
Why don't you care ?

Why you move alone? Why you move far?
Why you always fight? & then holding tight?
Why u lift me up? Why u removed my tears?
Where are you now, against my fears?

If I am irritating, If I am annoying
If I am insane, I am horrible
If I said rubbish, If I act fool
Then why don't u react, Why don't u scold?

If I did this to you, then you did to me too
The fights the apologies all we knew
But, what we do now ?as time caught us tight,
its hard to escape its hard to take it light

You are my love, you are my life
You are my smile, you are my tear
You are my companion, you are my partner
But where you disappear?

Come back soon Come back soon
I know we complaining same with this croon,
So dear Time! Please be fast for precious day
When we got tied without any delay

Will tie u up with strong knot
To move alone will not we plot
You have to handle this mad girl
You have to answer my arguments whirl

Don't you worry for this quite
Our love is more strong than every fight,
As, I am yours n you are mine
With a bond that is superfine

`AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[KWP]

see ... I am smiling again ... the best part about an argument is making up ... and another thing ... men think very differently to us gals... yeah ... just that

man if I could tell you the amount of arguments I have had in my time ... oh and I am like a firecraker ... once I blow, well thats it really ... hahaha (i am getting better with age - just like a fine scotch)

you captured the raw emotoins here very nicely

[Eve Ola]

i never showed my firecraker side haha. thank you so much for making me laugh n for kind words :)

[KWP]

sometimes I go off by accident .... hahahaha then I must remember to practice my humble ways ...

[Eve Ola]

how similar you are :P i love your humble ways

[Coyote Poetry]

Fighting and loving. A good love for some.
"Don't you worry for this quite
Our love is more strong than every fight,
As, I am yours n you are mine
With a bond that is superfine"
I did like the above lines. Love and war is norm for many in love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kurayami]

I like it. It's simple yet the nature of the poem is...making me speechless.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

Sweet..thank you :)

[Penny]

"You have to handle this mad girl
You have to answer my arguments whirl"

You are really lucky if you find someone who not only loves or protects you but controls or bears you when youae at your worst. Very nice poem. Hope you find more love in life and write even more lovely poetry.

[Eve Ola]

aww thank you so much for such sweet n kind words.I really appreciate :)

[Penny]

Trust me his poem is worth even more praise

[Eve Ola]

aww sweet :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful, really meaningful piece.
Was full of emotion, raw passion, meaning and love.
This piece really comes from your heart and it shows
My boyfriend and I can relate to this piece.

This was my favourite line:
But, what we do now ? as time caught us tight,
its hard to escape its hard to take it light.

Great write I enjoyed it, Keep writing :)

[Eve Ola]

atlast someone is there to relate it :D i am so glad that you enjoyed Thank you so much Cimmy :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

You are more than welcome.
It was such a beautiful piece.

[anne]

well....a sweet one in expressing feelings.....

[Eve Ola]

Thanks .

[Avinash]

I am thanking God for still keeping my bachelor and saving from wrath of a loving woman... :)
Jokes apart there seem to be some genuine complaints in the above lines. :)

[Eve Ola]

I wish you soon wrap by such wrath of loving woman :p

[Avinash]

..........:)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I hope it is all better by now
very sad but sweet how you showed love.


I understand it can like Drama at home
and feels like WW2.


Beautiful stanza's lines here.

You are my love, you are my life
You are my smile, you are my tear
You are my companion, you are my partner


Blessings. kindred poet

[Eve Ola]

yes all better now :) your words are always so kind n sweet Thanks :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's a pleasure my friend. you're very welcome. blessings. kindred poet

[stars are far]

yes, that is sad very sad.. i hope it all gets closer and happiness fill your life

[Eve Ola]

that was a sweet love figh :)