Hectic Day & Loving Lap Connection

Hectic Day & Loving Lap Connection

A Poem by Eve Ola

Hectic Day & Loving Lap Connection

Missing you much of this busy day
Feeling tired by hectic way
Oh Dear Love need you now
Recalling a day with a loving lap wow
So,
Want you again to sit by my side
So putting my head in that lap again
Where I forget my all my woes
Magical lap for removing tiredness
Just by moving fingers through my hairs
Your words are like a sweet lullaby
Call my name again and again
Its soothing medley for me in all
As I feel more special by vein
When You call me by your loving name
Your gentle touch to my face
I really miss this by time
And the way you lift my front cut
And fixing it behind my ear
And another tuning by your eyes
Loving lap and warmth around
Leads me to wonderful sleep
Want this moment to freeze long
You Me And loving Lap
Sleepy talks with you around
With calling my name as sweet lullaby


~AK~

© Eve Ola

© 2014 Eve Ola


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More of a thought than a poem. Very pure and raw. Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


More of a thought than a poem. Very pure and raw. Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


More of a thought than a poem. Very pure and raw. Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the gentle pace and the want in the poem. Good to want the simple gifts of love. A place to rest and kind words. No better place to be. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, this poem is sweet but not over the top sweet. "Wow" done!

~Kurayami

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

thanks Kurayami :)
a sweet and a very lovely one......

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thanks Anne
Very sweet little poem. :)
Very nice Eva.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Ance :)
i do hope that you put all of these in a little book for when you and he are old .... little snippets of your day filled with love that just keeps bobbing along ... x x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the idea :) your words are always inspiring. Thanks :)
Sweet melody of poetic effect

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Writer at last! Sky ~

10 Years Ago

Welcome friend!
hope the best journey in love

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Shukran :)
Salem

10 Years Ago

3afwan dear :D

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