Strong Lady - Story of All

Strong Lady - Story of All

This Girl is definitely
A strong lady,
She can deal with stress
and carry heavy burdens
She smiles,
When she feels like screaming
And
She cries when she's happy
Her love is unconditional
But,
There is only one thing wrong with her
SHE FORGETS WHAT SHE IS WORTH!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Penny]

Looks like description of an Indian mom. Frankly, its the senstivity only that makes a woman strong. She looks strange but she is strong. The last line just steals the show. Very expressive and powerful write. Keep writing.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Penny :)

[Penny]

My pleasure.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Salute to all the women's ......

[Eve Ola]

Yes :D

[priya]

A woman's love is so selfless that she loves everyone but themselves.. and she seldom knows her worth. sad but true.. overall, your poem was wonderful and it brought with it a beautiful realization. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks priya :)

[vaishnavi]

that girl is just like like u as i could tell how u r from ur poems....

[Eve Ola]

:) .

[vaishnavi]

^_^ .

[KWP]

one of the biggest lessons in life right here ... to put yourself first above everyone else ... some may see it as selfish, but, if you are happy your love will be stronger and the love for everyone around you will grow stronger too .... a great message for a great many ... I am glad I learnt the depth of this one ... very nicely articulated x x

[Eve Ola]

I really appreciate your encouraging words Thank you :)