Silent Thoughts - Hidden Behind

Silent Thoughts - Hidden Behind

Twinkle twinkle silent thoughts
With moving puzzles all throughout
Trying a lot to fix them all
But every time down to fall
Oh Super angle! Come in
Hold them all and put to bin
Scary sounds roaring aside
Moving dreams behind a side
Set my life with peace around
Health wealthy all around
Oh Dear destiny, stop a while
Hear my pray and refile
Not just me but for all
Repeating story of them all
Wish to spread happiness around
Give me strength to move around
Up above the sky so high
Want to fly high n high
Oh Lord! Hear me please
Give them all a silent release

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Mirra]

Love the rhymes here! Great work!

[Kurayami]

This is nice and I like the way you make your poems rhyme.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

And thank you so much for giving your precious time I really appreciate.your words are blessing for me n so encouraging Thanks again :) stay around.

Eve

[caide]

superb......................... :D

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Caide :)

[Ayushi]

Such a simple write with true and innocent intentions.
Well done :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for kind feedback :)

[Swaroop Manikandan]

lovely read... thanks for sharing...

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[priya]

Amazing Eve. It is so pleasant to see how you turned a nursery poem into a fabulous one. The rhyming is so perfect. It feels so good readin it. :)

[Eve Ola]

thanks dear em glad u enjoyed it :)

[priya]

it was a wonderful poem. :)