Oh Dear Rain - You & my Craziness

Oh Dear Rain - You & my Craziness

A Poem by Eve Ola

Oh Dear Rain - You & my Craziness

Falling Down, sprinkling up,
Out of the sky, into my cup.

What is this wet, that comes from above,
That some call disaster, and others find love.

The harder it falls, the more it is nice,
The colder it falls the harder the ice.

The rain has an art that I may not get,
So I stand still here and get soaking wet.

I feel so complete when I'm in the rain,
I feel no sorrow I feel no pain,

It may give cold but I don't care,
I have to jump in like my hare

There's a calming sensation from grass to air,
I feel so light, while sitting on my chair.

The feeling of love I have for rain,
Oh dear Rain!
Can u feel the same when i am in Rain?

~AK~

© Eve Ola


© 2014 Eve Ola


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"I feel so complete when I'm in the rain, I feel no sorrow I feel no pain," The rain is natures cleanser it fixes and heals everything.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

yeah exactly Thank you :)
The harder it falls, the more it is nice,
The colder it falls the harder the ice.

The rain has an art that I may not get,
So I stand still here and get soaking wet.

A very good description of rain. Here is monsoon so it is more fun for me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

yeah i felt it more deep as rain is my first love :D
Well you make me fall in love with the rain...beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
This has sublime beauty and perfection to it.. describing true emotion, the feelings of expressing something ever clear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thanks Keegan for the read :)
The warm Summer rain can be nice if with good company. You made rain seem warm and cozy in the amazing poem. I always like poetry that ends with a question. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote! I appreciate your words :)
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
very beautiful poem i could picture everything in my mind :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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vaishnavi

10 Years Ago

ur welcome
This is a really beautiful poem. The rhymes are so nice.

~Kurayami

Posted 10 Years Ago


Eve Ola

10 Years Ago

Thanks Kurayami :)

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