Oh Dear Rain - You & my Craziness

Oh Dear Rain - You & my Craziness

Falling Down, sprinkling up,
Out of the sky, into my cup.

What is this wet, that comes from above,
That some call disaster, and others find love.

The harder it falls, the more it is nice,
The colder it falls the harder the ice.

The rain has an art that I may not get,
So I stand still here and get soaking wet.

I feel so complete when I'm in the rain,
I feel no sorrow I feel no pain,

It may give cold but I don't care,
I have to jump in like my hare

There's a calming sensation from grass to air,
I feel so light, while sitting on my chair.

The feeling of love I have for rain,
Oh dear Rain!
Can u feel the same when i am in Rain?

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Mirra]

I love how you described not just the rain but the feeling of getting soaked under the rain. Fresh and beautiful. Great work!

[Aprille]

I love the rain so much...most of the time, I find it calming and refreshing. And I love your words, having to appreciate little things that some people fail to notice.

[Eve Ola]

thank you so much for differentiating my work..more encouraging :)

[Aprille]

My pleasure as always. :)

[Matching Socks]

Rain is common theme for you I think. :)
I think this poem is so light and carefree. I'm so glad you see the fun and beauty in rainfall.

[Eve Ola]

yes whenever its rain I feel light :) Thanks for kind review :)

[J. K. Beach]

Eve-- this a wonderfully cohesive piece, clear and precise. It has a gentle lyrical quality that makes it fun to read. Your delight in and love for the rain shines through!

[Eve Ola]

Thanks JKB :) your words are always so encouraging so blessed for me. Thanks for being around and giving time to my writes I do appreciate and that's what I need. Thank you :)

[anne]

I told you earlier also you are doing your best whenever you write fiction.....
I am damn sure you love rain...many of your poem comes from there......
it was really awesome experience reading this one.............

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Anne your words are always blessing for me :)

[Eve Ola]

and yeah Rain is my first love ;)

[Penny]

I thought of writing a poem about rain too but then I dropped the idea, guess that was time you started writing this poem :-). Well written piece, really close to my heart. Keep writing.

[Eve Ola]

yeah i picked your pen then :) Thanks you so much

[Penny]

My pleasure..

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is so catchy! Great work!╰☆╮

[Eve Ola]

Thank you, Brittany :)

[The Quill]

nice and refreshing :) flow is awesome

[Eve Ola]

thanks again Quill :)

[stars are far]

That was amazingly writen..
keep up the good work

[Eve Ola]

Thank you friend its means more :)