You are My True Need Indeed !!
A Poem by
Eve Ola
He, My only need !!
You are My True Need Indeed !! You are my beat, That I need to live this life. You are my soul, That I need to stand beside. You are my smile, That I need for more smiles. You are my diary, That I need to write anything. You are my key, That I need to open any door. You are my companion, That I ever need to spend this life. You are my wish, That I always wish from above. You are my champion, Who exactly knows how I feel n how to hold. Because you knew me true Who I am? You love me the way I am. Yes you are my true need indeed, That I need with me, by each second.. ~AK~
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Eve Ola
© 2014 Eve Ola
Reviews
such a beautiful poem. it shows exactly how pure love is and why it is said that love is blind :)
god bless you. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
sweettt thanks a lot priya :)
10 Years Ago
you are welcome :)
Lucky is the guy for whom you have written this wonderful poem.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Lucky is the guy for whom you have written this wonderful poem.
10 Years Ago
yeah :D thanks Avinash :)
Amazing and positive flow of thoughts. I like the way you led the reader into internal thoughts of what someone is to you. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
Amazing and positive flow of thoughts. I like the way you led the reader into internal thoughts of what someone is to you. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote
10 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote Your words are highly appreciated:)
10 Years Ago
You are welcome. I enjoyed the want and the need of the poem.
aw so sweet poem full of love
i like the line
You love me the way I am
shows the reflection of love from him of urs
Posted 10 Years Ago
aw so sweet poem full of love
i like the line
You love me the way I am
shows the reflection of love from him of urs
10 Years Ago
Thanks vashnavi :)
10 Years Ago
your welcome
by the way ' i ' is missing from my name still it doesn't makes much pronunciat.. read more your welcome
by the way ' i ' is missing from my name still it doesn't makes much pronunciation difference at last gr8 ppl have said ' whats in a name ? ' lol
This was simple yet sweet poem, the i e which gives you good vibes:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
This was simple yet sweet poem, the i e which gives you good vibes:)
10 Years Ago
Thank you :)
I noticed a couple small typos dairy / diary & know / knows & not sure about n but this was awesome... loved it!!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
I noticed a couple small typos dairy / diary & know / knows & not sure about n but this was awesome... loved it!!!
10 Years Ago
Thanks your review is highly appreciated :)
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