You are My True Need Indeed !!

He, My only need !!

You are My True Need Indeed !!

You are my beat,
That I need to live this life.

You are my soul,
That I need to stand beside.

You are my smile,
That I need for more smiles.

You are my diary,
That I need to write anything.

You are my key,
That I need to open any door.

You are my companion,
That I ever need to spend this life.

You are my wish,
That I always wish from above.

You are my champion,
Who exactly knows how I feel n how to hold.

Because you knew me true Who I am?
You love me the way I am.

Yes you are my true need indeed,
That I need with me, by each second..


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Wandering Minstrel]

Amazing and incredibly inspiring write

[Eve Ola]

Thanks a lot :)

[anne]

loved reading this one.....beauty...

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[Kurayami]

I think you already know what I want to say this time. This is a great poem. Kind of romantic actually.

~Kurayami

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for stopping by, I do appreciate :)

[Ashira Macy]

I love your "You are" repetition in this, it tied things together nicely. Very sweet and romantic.

[Eve Ola]

Thank you! your feedback is much appreciated :)

[Matching Socks]

I love the sweet simplicity of this one.
Beautiful. :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks a lot Ance :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮This is wonderful and simple. Nice work.╰☆╮

[Eve Ola]

Thank you Brittany :)

[Salem]

superb writing, you have a talent

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for stopping by :)

[Penny]

We dont love anyone because we need that person, but once we all in love we need that person for everything, and you have exactly and perfevtly described that in this poem. Wonderful.

[Eve Ola]

yeah you picked it right. Thanks :)

[Penny]

My pleasure and i am always right... haha

[Luissanto]

Truly beautiful and inspiring... You've expressed in a few lines, what a lot of people have
been waiting their whole lifetimes to hear.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Luissanto for such praising words :)

[The Quill]

simple and very beautiful, powerful poetry :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Quill :)