You are My True Need Indeed !!

He, My only need !!

You are My True Need Indeed !!

You are my beat,
That I need to live this life.

You are my soul,
That I need to stand beside.

You are my smile,
That I need for more smiles.

You are my diary,
That I need to write anything.

You are my key,
That I need to open any door.

You are my companion,
That I ever need to spend this life.

You are my wish,
That I always wish from above.

You are my champion,
Who exactly knows how I feel n how to hold.

Because you knew me true Who I am?
You love me the way I am.

Yes you are my true need indeed,
That I need with me, by each second..


~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[Mirra]

Romantic and sweetly written :-) Great job!

[Prabha Salimath]

Romantic Eve like the flow of your words, it is very sinc with your feelings. 'He' is very lucky person.

[paul sal.....]

"Love is a many splendored thing"

[Miss Owl]

A very romantic poem. Beautiful and inspiring words. I think is what we all want in our lives.

[Tom]

A open and honest portrayal of uninhibited and holistic love, charmingly penned with sincere sentiment!

[Susan Beth Horvath]

It is good in content, but you might reconsider the format. I've noticed you have a habit, in your poetry, of writing the same words over and over. In this case, "that I". This type of thing can get tiresome for the reader. You should also work on punctuation.

[Eve Ola]

correct I need such feedback. thank you :)

[Mayank]

This is written with so much love, anything written with love touches you with memories.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Mayank :)

[Jennie Baron]

How romantic. This is the essence of true love, I think...The tight structure of this write and the repetition are appealing and the vocabulary you use is just right.

[Eve Ola]

Thank you so much Jennie :)

[Ruth]

Uplifting :) A charming poem of hope and insight, beautiful x

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ruth :)