Forever Love-I Miss You Papa

The relation I missed throughout my life, My Father

Forever Love-I Miss You Papa

Its a day, When I am just 9 years old..
When Papa Jani didn't
Come back home..


I use to sleep
By seeing him
While he was laying
On his bed,
But now I have just
sleepless nights...


I use to jump
In his lap
Just to check
That he smoked or not,
That while
Papa smiled & said
No beta (daughter) I didn't,
Come here
I have candies for you...


Those days when
He taught me to ride a bicycle,
I will never forget..
Once I fell down.. when I looked back
and came to know that,
He didn't held the bike,
He came quickly & said,
Oh Beta! lagi toh nahi

(Oh my Child! Did it hurt?)

i am sorry beta...
Ahh
Papa I will never forget..


The day when I fell in school
And got my knee injured,
You picked me up
In your lap and
Took me from that place
To my bed..
But now no more of that
Loving lap...


Papa..
When you left,
I opened your dairy,
You even saved the date
When I took the 1st step
On the floor..


Non stop tears
I have...
Papa where ever You are
You are always there
Whenever I need you...


This time at 4:20am 10th sep 2011
I would say
You are still very dear
Very near &
I miss you in every tear
This time I have...


I love u Papa
You are always the
Superest hero
Of your doll ..
I miss u Papa..

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Author's Note

That's my first writing I ever wrote

Reviews

[Mirra]

Aww. So sweet and innocent yet so emotional. I read this while hearing a voice of a little girl reciting this poem to me. Wow. This is incredible piece. Anyone can relate and be touched on this poem, although I think you should put rhyming to some lines. But this is really magnificent.

[Penny]

Made me quite emotional, you touched the delicate spot. It has been rightly said that all boys are mumma's boys and all girls are daddy's girls. If a father, who knew his responsibilities so well and cared for his daughter would still cry for her wherever he is. Not everyone is that lucky. Bless you, be happy for what you have because you are blessed. Very nice poem.

[Eve Ola]

thanks Penny your words are so inspiring admiring and really appreciating . Thanks :)

[Penny]

My pleasure truly..

[priya]

i cant express what i feel right now. its wonderful considering it is your first poem. keep writing dear..you are blessed :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Priya .. your words makes me feel glad :)

[priya]

my pleasure Eve Ola. :)

[Avinash]

Loved it simply..have no words . Will invite you to one of my works on similar lines

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Avinash :) sure i will wait

[1Disawsum]

Wow... this is a heartfelt poem, very touching. Such an emotional piece, yet in loving memory. Love it, many can relate too.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for the words dear :)

[Blue]

First writing? My tears almost jumped out of my sockets when I read this! Just polish some grammatical errors and it'll be better. Best wishes.

[Eve Ola]

Thank you arzel. your feedback is much apperciated n yeah my first writing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

This is a beautiful and sad poem. This is real poetry and sadness. You brought your Papa back to life and you need to keep this poem close forever. These are the poetry we need when we get old and forget. We need to remember the people who have loved us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. You were talented than and today.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Coyote, nice meeting you here. & thanks for your visit and kind words, highly appreciated :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. You made me think of my missed father.

[Eve Ola]

those who dont have this relation in their lives or living far away, can truly picked my feelings n relate. this father daughter relation is so adorable but unfortunately i missed from age of 10 :(

[stars are far]

That was so sad..well written

[Eve Ola]

Yeah sad. thanks for liking

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Oh wow Daddy was the first word I ever said as a baby.
I was a Daddies girl.
my dad taught me to ride a bike and tie my shoes.

I had my Dad for a long time then after his Struggle
with Alcohol he drifted away he is California I still
miss those times as a child spent with him and I still
pray for him we write now in then but I pray he will be
rid of that addiction and it will be
like it was when I was little.



This really Touched my Heart this is going into to
my reading I just love it.


Memories can be a Blessing and sometimes painful
too but when I hurt it tells me I still care and I am
human I never want to be
numb where I can't feel love it will surely kill me and
I would die of a Broken Heart.

What do the words not in English mean I Know
the Italians say Papa :) many Cultures use the
name Papa.


This really hit me hard in my heart thank you
for sharing this beautiful heart warming piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Eve Ola]

I am glad you like it. thank you so much for each single word you said.

I will pray too for him with lots of more blessing for you n your family :)

the part in Urdu he said "Beta (daughter) did it hurt much?"

I am updating my poem with this translation too. thanks again

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome I truly Enjoyed the read. It's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet