May be you found errors or tiring style or repetition but this piece .... I have much strong bonding with this piece of mine. These are not just words but a real commitment and I wrote this when actually I am realizing all these vows.
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I loved the last line most of all because it is quite easy to say things and stand by someone's side for a while. But keeping those words forever is real love.
Lovely write :)
Wow, truly amazing, insightful and beautifully written. I truly wish the whole world
could read your words and take them to heart. Your words touched me...
You are truly a great writer.
Thank You
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
thanks a lot for such a sweet and encouraging feedback. Thanks a lot :)
These are vows that should be written down and kept for your wedding one day when you're ready. This is amazing. It is so sweet, passionate, and determined. The determination is to keep these vows for as long as you're with this person. This type of style makes me smile and keeps my heart in a joyous beat. A love like this should be adored and envied by others. Love like this is hard to find these days. Don't take these moments for granted. Let these memories and moments inspire your work. Outstanding job. Adding to my favorites. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Wow you make me feel great :) Its my fvourite poem I ever wrote n I always keep my words as I said. .. read moreWow you make me feel great :) Its my fvourite poem I ever wrote n I always keep my words as I said. Your feedback is highly apperciated thank you so much for such nice words :)