I Vow - Love Tenderness

Vows that I always keep !!

I Vow - Love Tenderness

I vow,
To love you always,
To be at your side when needed
To be a part of your sadness &
To be your happiness always

I vow,
To be your true companion
To be a true daughter for a family
To be a true friend with tenderness &
To be your pleasing rest place

I vow,
To adore you like a baby
To hug you when there's fall
To support you at your peak &
To love you more of all

I vow,
To help your love life
To hold you with patience that love demands
To speak when words are needed &
To share the silence at its peak

I vow,
To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm
To live within the warmth of your heart &
To call it always my heaven

I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Author's Note

May be you found errors or tiring style or repetition but this piece .... I have much strong bonding with this piece of mine. These are not just words but a real commitment and I wrote this when actually I am realizing all these vows.

Reviews

[Lacie Blackwood]

Great poem :) It was very touching!
I really enjoyed this.

My favorite words were;
"I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!"

Thank you for the lovely poem :)

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Lacie I do appreciate your words :)

[Lacie Blackwood]

My pleasure :)

[Tania]

I vow,
To help your love life
To hold you with patience that love demands
To speak when words are needed &
To share the silence at its peak. Beautiful words......:) love is truly powerful and to sustain it;commitment,loyalty,truthfulness,and compassion is required.

[Eve Ola]

Thank you for the time and read :)

[Enayet1999]

a very intriguing poem
i like the ways you've presented love.
May i ask if you can review my chapter one official?
Cheers

[Eve Ola]

Thanks man

[Rene Salinas]

I have read a few of your wrtings now and I start to create a concept. You seem to like the concept of repetition. Inviting the reader in a quasi mantra state. It is effective I agree but as it bounds it also restricts. So here is what happened to me. I read it, and how could I disagree with your words ? It would be foolish and I wouldn't disagree either with 1 Corinthians 13:4-8 Love is patient, Love is kind.... but the mantra effect becomes tiring as if wanting to take the individuality of the writer and replace it for repetition.

Strange I know maybe is just me, proabably is all just me

Thankyou for the invite

[Eve Ola]

ooopss sorry for making u feel tiring. but by chance you read similar style of my poetry. i have variety in my work. and I totally agree with what you said. btw Thanks for stopping by

[Rene Salinas]

You missunderstood me is not that what you wrote made me tired at all is that the form you choose has the potential of... the risk of... A tendency to.... Just like the example I refer to.

[Mayank]

"To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm
To live within the warmth of your heart &
To call it always my heaven"
These words just took me down with grace.... an uncompromising love is the best.

[Eve Ola]

Wow thanks again man :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

I swear i loved this.. "fiercely loving somebody in all their form"- that line made shivers run down my body.it is very rarely that you will get such a person.. You have vowed may god bless you to keep it ;)

~Sophy

[Eve Ola]

your words are blessing for me Sophy Thanks a lot and keep reviewing :)

[Steve L.]

Wow!!! Really heart-felt. True devotion to someone, through everything, is a very rare and amirable thing.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Steve it means a lot :)

[Jennie Baron]

This is truly touching and couldn't have been stated more beautifully. Well done!

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Jennie it means a lot :)