May be you found errors or tiring style or repetition but this piece .... I have much strong bonding with this piece of mine. These are not just words but a real commitment and I wrote this when actually I am realizing all these vows.
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gOOD FOR YOU. sO OFTEN THE VOWS WE MAKE ARE NEVER TO BE. Your poem reads like a prayer, and the sincerity comes across well. In the third stanza, where you say 'To hug you when there's fall' do you mean 'a fall'?
"I vow" really is very inspiring in this poem.
A committment and sticking up to that is as good as you are breathing for your life. A relationship needs to breath to survive and prosper. I wish it to come true in your life for the rest of your life.
I liked the repetition personally. It ties the poem together and gives off the feelings of how serious you are about your unconditional love for this person. Vows are like promises, but stronger and more binding in my opinion. You vow to do something and it is not to be forgotten or broken, there must be follow through. Beautiful work.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Yeah I really mean all And I surely follow them till my last breath. thanks for your kind praising r.. read moreYeah I really mean all And I surely follow them till my last breath. thanks for your kind praising review that means a lot :)