I Vow - Love Tenderness

Vows that I always keep !!

I Vow - Love Tenderness

I vow,
To love you always,
To be at your side when needed
To be a part of your sadness &
To be your happiness always

I vow,
To be your true companion
To be a true daughter for a family
To be a true friend with tenderness &
To be your pleasing rest place

I vow,
To adore you like a baby
To hug you when there's fall
To support you at your peak &
To love you more of all

I vow,
To help your love life
To hold you with patience that love demands
To speak when words are needed &
To share the silence at its peak

I vow,
To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm
To live within the warmth of your heart &
To call it always my heaven

I vow,
To never forget our love because
This is a once in a lifetime love
What all i said above, I vow
To keep now & forever!!

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Author's Note

May be you found errors or tiring style or repetition but this piece .... I have much strong bonding with this piece of mine. These are not just words but a real commitment and I wrote this when actually I am realizing all these vows.

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

gOOD FOR YOU. sO OFTEN THE VOWS WE MAKE ARE NEVER TO BE. Your poem reads like a prayer, and the sincerity comes across well. In the third stanza, where you say 'To hug you when there's fall' do you mean 'a fall'?

[Penny]

I dont know if it was intended but I felt this poem was all about different roles a girl, specially an Indian girl plays. Well done.

[Prabha Salimath]

"I vow" really is very inspiring in this poem.
A committment and sticking up to that is as good as you are breathing for your life. A relationship needs to breath to survive and prosper. I wish it to come true in your life for the rest of your life.

[Hessy]

nice work,
i actually enjoyed it

[MsJewel]

I love the repetition, it gave this beautifully romantic poem a wonderful flow.
Stunning writing!

:) Julie

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Julie I do appreciate your words :)

[Dee]

Beautiful poem of love and dedication~ I like the repetition ~
Bravo Eve...Thank you for sharing your beautiful vows...........Dee.

[Eve Ola]

em so glad you enjoyed :) Thanks Dee

[KK]

I surprisingly enjoyed it. Cant wait to read more

[Eve Ola]

Thanks KK :)

[Ashira Macy]

I liked the repetition personally. It ties the poem together and gives off the feelings of how serious you are about your unconditional love for this person. Vows are like promises, but stronger and more binding in my opinion. You vow to do something and it is not to be forgotten or broken, there must be follow through. Beautiful work.

[Eve Ola]

Yeah I really mean all And I surely follow them till my last breath. thanks for your kind praising review that means a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

"To fiercely love you in all your forms
To be your side with each norm"

[Eve Ola]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

:)................

[Tom]

Yes indeed, true commitment is a necessary factor if any relationship is to survive and prosper !

A pleasant poetic affirmation, penned with conviction and alluring sentiment !

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Tom for praising my work :)