Broken Inside

A lonely girl with broken heart - Sad Poems

Broken Inside

Scattered pieces everywhere
Shedding tears here there
Screaming loud deeply inside
Smiling upside dying inside?

Standing alone, fighting for what
For my life or for what?
The harder the outside
The weakest the inside

Oh Almighty!!
You know my needs
Am I going with bad deeds?
Darker room darker thoughts
Deadly going fearing a lot:(

You love me all, I love you too
But listen me too, I will too
Weeping Fearing Scary screaming
Want to die in my dreaming

Hear my voice listen me please
Deep inside I am deceased
Don't go hard, begging for this
Hug me ones its my wish

Come here please,
Hug me tighter, Be my fighter
Fighter Guider all together
Be just mine & my Binder
Broken pieces glue together

Ended words & blank mind
I will be ok don't be kind
Its a time just feeling down
Right time to shutdown

~AK~

© Eve Ola

Reviews

[The Quill]

a sad verse...but penned with beauty and sophistication , great work

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Quill your words are appreciated :)

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

Expressive poem with melancholic tone. Sad and beautiful at the same time.

[Eve Ola]

thank you thanks for the feel :)

[1Disawsum]

Such a sad poem, but a deep, insightful and meaningful in a way poem. Great flow with words, you really are an amazing creator of poems! Well done, great words in a great poem. Many congratulations.

[Eve Ola]

aww sweet thanks for paising my work :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So much sadness and raw emotion in this I could feel it.

But beautifully penned thank you for sharing this lovely piece
and thank you for your kind review and comments.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Eve Ola]

Thanks kindred for liking my work :) stay blessed

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. I enjoy reading your work. blessings. kindred poet

[Half Dream]

I love the emotions in this write. Very sad but expressive! :)

[Eve Ola]

thanks for the feel :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful emotion in the poem. I could feel the sadness and the disappointment.
"Its a time just feeling down
Right time to shutdown"
Sometimes shutting down is all we can do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Eve Ola]

Thank you so much Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Salem]

wooooooooooooooow

I really enjoyed reading this poem well done

[Eve Ola]

Thank you :)

[ron]

Beautiful and sad. Love can do this to us. Love the poem...full of emotions.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks Ron!!

[ron]

Your welcome Eve.

[ron]

Your welcome Eve.

[gabrielle]

i could feel deep angst on this piece. A voice wanting to be heard and wanting to be understood. keep on writing.

[Eve Ola]

Thanks for the words you said :)