Anger

My first online poem (: hope you like it!

Ice inside my burning veins 

so maddening I can't explain

How painful the sight of you is

Remembering that fateful kiss

When I thought I found my guardian angel

when all i found was a satanic stranger

Reviews

[LeeLee Ryder]

Great 1st liner... Very visual & visceral ...
There definitely is a fine line between love & hate
Angels guised as satanic strangers happens more then we think.
Good job, Free
LLR

[Tree Bark]

short but that is what makes it better because yet its short there's still lot of emotions in it

[Little Birdie]

So very familiar with the feeling. Nice contrasts, short but has a certain weight to it.

[Kalpit]

very short - but nice!
and the feeling - yes, it hurts, very badly!
keep writing :)