Inspiration

Inspiration

 

Lost

that's what he is

 

 

Running

from what he isn't sure

 

 

Star gazing

On a night he can barely remember

 

 

Wasting his youth

On cheap booze and fast sex

 

 

He doesn't see

oh, he's really got potential

 

 

He doesn't know

I'm watching his mistakes

Reviews

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I like this piece.
It sounds like the internal monologue of a secret admirer, who herself lacks the courage to take initiative in bettering the life of her love. Many dimensions to explore. That's just my take on it.
Thanks for sharing!