Out of the frying pan, into...

like the sky decided

to just fall off

        onto my lap

                and break a million times

spilling, spilling, spilling

every opportunity

        RIGHT. OUT. ON. ME.

like i just learned to fly

        or

jumped hoping i could

knowing - fly or fall - i'll love it

live or die, it'll be alright

 

if we never meet again

        you'll still be who i dream of

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Once again another none uplifting poem with regret and philosophical ideas,if it aint going to happen don't worry about it only worry about things that you can control and are within your influence everything else can sort itself out,that is my philosophy in life,not so much rhyming here but insightful nevertheless.

[alan khan]

last two lines were really cool. very interesting write.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

the poem itself is a wonderful way of expressing a feeling, but the last two lines could stand on their own as a powerful little poem. very precise and nicely done.

[Ama May Cooper]

i hate the way that made so much sense, so much painful, love filled sense... i admire that piece of work.. beautiful