The Message

I received a message today

 

Message

From You

Completely shocked

Appalled actually,

Shameless accusations

Secrets are lies.

Motivation unspoken

Complete honesty,

Stakes the claim

Discontented disclaimer

Fortunate to know

I am not the only one

Who feels this way

Fortunate to breathe

Fortunate to liberate

Oh the wonderment of it all

An Oasis in the storm

Walls built to last

Broken down forever

Reviews

This is pretty good. I like how it comes to a point! This is a poem that I have to agree makes the reader stop and think!

[James K. Blaylock]

I really enjoyed this piece, it got me thinking. Which is a great thing.

jkb