Looking
A Poem by
~LeeAnn~
I look out my window
And I see the sun
I look at you
And see what you've done
I look out my door
And I see the rain
I look at you
And see my pain
I look in the mirror
And see my tears
I look at you
And see me worst fears
© 2009 ~LeeAnn~
Reviews
Very well perceived and put-together; simple, concise and poetic. Beautiful expression, composition and flow. A+
Posted 15 Years Ago
I adore how you continually look back at the person and see some awful doom coming. Some people are like that... This has a lot of emotion in it ((as everyone else has already said)). It was a really fun piece to read!
Posted 15 Years Ago
I adore how you continually look back at the person and see some awful doom coming. Some people are like that... This has a lot of emotion in it ((as everyone else has already said)). It was a really fun piece to read!
Well written! I love how you capture your emotion through this peice, I love it and cant wait to read more of your work!!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Well written! I love how you capture your emotion through this peice, I love it and cant wait to read more of your work!!
i don't know if i am right...but it seems that you're afraid of loose him? *not sure*
But...you did it again...good poem...
Posted 15 Years Ago
i don't know if i am right...but it seems that you're afraid of loose him? *not sure*
But...you did it again...good poem...
Wow. This is a little edgy. On one hand it speaks of a love lost, but on the other, there seems to be something more sinister at work.
"I look at you
And see what you've done"
Could be read soooo many different ways. Very good.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Wow. This is a little edgy. On one hand it speaks of a love lost, but on the other, there seems to be something more sinister at work.
"I look at you
And see what you've done"
Could be read soooo many different ways. Very good.
Such a emotional write here
I can snese hurt.
Very well expressed emotions.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Such a emotional write here
I can snese hurt.
Very well expressed emotions.
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Added on September 28, 2009
Last Updated on October 27, 2009
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~LeeAnn~ The dark depths of my mind.
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There is nothing really special about me, other than the fact that I love to read books, and I am currently writeing my first book ( I finaley have a title for it) I AM TERRIFIED OF CLOWNS!!!!!!, so d..
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