would you miss me...

If I were to die today

Without another word to say

Without a goodbye

But with a single tear in my eye

Would you miss me.....

If I were to die tonight

Without a future in sight

Without you by my side

But with you damage still inside

Would you miss me.....

If I were to die tomorrow

Without letting go of my sorrow

Without letting you know

But with simply just letting go

Would you miss me...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe you would be missed. I have known too many who left without a goodbye. Leave marks and scars on their friends and family. A powerful poem. A excellent question you left us with. A outstanding short poem.
Coyote

[Dillon Cotter]

kinda sad but this one is great =)

-Will

[Disturbed mind]

So sad yet beautiful...so simple yet deep...so dark yet colourful...
iI really liked this one...the way that you put the feelings, the simphony of the thoughts...

Great job...

[Through the Gateway]

A true lament. Often we lay at night thinking about loves past, recent or distant, and wondering about whether they are thinking of us.

A good piece. I like the repetition.

[deeps]

Wow! Very emotional write here
I can feel your sorrow.
Your words flowed so well too.