Things

Like the rain

My tears fall

Like a shatterd window

My heart is broken

Like the air

My soul is now invisible

Like the wind

My voice is only a whisper

 

Reviews

[Randal Bright]

You're very good at putting your emotion on your poetry. I know that when I write sad poems... or poems of how I feel, I tend to feel much better after writing it. I've been reading some of your new posts and I see you keep getting better and better after every poem you post on here. I feel the sadness and torment you have in this poem. Nothing hurts worse than a broken heart.