Our Bodies

You hold my heart in the palm of your hand

and the key around your neck

You capture my soul in your eyes

and hold it there

You take my breath away with your smile

but you always give it back

You cloud my mind with your kiss

and clear it with your touch

I come to know, the love I gave was too much

You handle me like a puppet..with you I lose control

You give me the heavens then you take it away
 You play with me, and I can't help it

What can I do. you are the master with all the magic

Its what I did for I gave in..I gave my heart..to you

 

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

100 very nice

[bluessadmood]

Oh that was so lovely..so tender
My heart in your hands..locks around my neck
You capture my soul with those eyes
You take my breath away with that smile
You cloud my mind with a kiss
But you clear it again with your touch
I come to know,the love I gave was too much
You handle me like a puppet..with you I lose all control
you give me heavens ,then take it away
You play with me,and I cant help it
what can I do ,you are the master,with all the magic
Its what I did for I gave in..I gave all my heart..to you
God this was so nice ,what heavenly language could we speak when we feel it so deep
Oh love how you make us lose all control..like feeling lost in a beautiful maze
lovely write..

[Randal Bright]

This is a really nice poem, the want and feeling you get with ones embrace... how love is more than emotion, but also a physical need and connection. The hints of sadness of giving too much of yourself too quickly to the idea of love with someone. Indeed a great poem.