Wishes

To the stars
sparkle eyes
hoping - dreaming

 

Blowing candles
Tossing eyelashes,
Pennies
While wishing

Author's Note

This was an attempt at a septolet. A septolet is an oriental form consisting of 14 words on seven lines depicting the same thought in two different poems that makes a picture. Alas, there is various information that contradicts has to the proper way to write this form. Here are two different sources of information: link and link. I didn't get the form quite right, so that means I get to try again :D

Reviews

[Allie]

wow. this simplicity and wistfulness of this captured my attention, i loved it