"IMPERFECTION of PERFECTION"

There was a point in time when

i had the perfect life, The greatest

thing to wake up to, Was the greatest person in my world.

We were best friends an also carried a relation. We were

TRULY, MADLY, an DEEPLY in love. We gave each other
our hearts, soul, an life. I would ride the worlds biggest

roller coaster, stand on the tallest mountain, an go sky diving
knowing that i am terrified of heights. Just to prove that

it was a love story, a fairytale, a myth of love an intimacy.

It effected my life in a way the world may never know of.

To fly with the birds, To swim with the dolphins, To be free

of every fear, to let ever moment last forever. I will never

forget my first true love. " The best love is

the kind that awakens the soul... thats what

i hoped to give you forever." Its not about keeping

your promises its about following your heart.

I will dance with you forever, listen to you sing

even if you are a terrible singer, True love never dies

when your inseparable, its the best kind of love,
it plants fire in our hearts.

Unfortunately mine didnt end with a

happily ever after. It ended in FATE!

an BELIEF, Believing that one day she will come.

"Behind every great love there is a great story"
An this is only the half of mine.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is nice, very thoughtful and deep...

inseperable = inseparable
Unfortunatly = unfortunately
hieghts = heights.
intamacy = intimacy
FAIT! = ????? I guess you mean "FATE" if I'm not wrong.....

And this blue color really made me "off"

So, its a nice write, just need a quick editing :)

[perfectlymetiKulous]

Not sure if you care about spelling, but just in case you do:
heights, inseparable, fate.

Otherwise, very lovely piece. You can tell that you've definitely been in love and know what it is to truly love someone.

[perfectlymetiKulous]

Not sure if you care about spelling, but just in case you do:
heights, inseparable, fate.

Otherwise, very lovely piece. You can tell that you've definitely been in love and know what it is to truly love someone.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

I like the feeling behind your writing.. not that I like pain.. it's that you love so deeply.. take life day by day.. enjoy it and who knows she just may come back to you.. if you love something set it free and if it comes back it's yours... if it doesn't then it never was.. famous saying! You have a gift and should follow it.. to shower your love on someone.. even if it is not that first love! Thank you!