My Sister and Her Cookies

 When my sister was younger, she was famous for throwing fits,

                                 My mom would always cure them, by baking cookies with chocolate chips,

My sister would eat these cookies, for breakfast snacks and lunch,

Sometimes she would save them, so she could eat them all at once…

Then one day we had guests over, I think it was Christmas Eve,

A couple with their two children, and a new puppy named Steve,

The dog observed my sister, eating cookies on the floor,

Every time she finished one she’d ask for one more,

She was always very messy and left crumbs on the ground,

She ate every one of them, every one she found,

It was then that she saw the biggest chocolate chip,

And couldn’t wait to eat it as she brought it to her lips,

Once it was in her mouth, it was then that she realized,

That the dog that was right next to her had left a little surprise,

Certain it was chocolate, she did not notice it was a t**d,

Shocked by the taste and texture, she couldn’t say a word,

And as her eyes filled with tears, she started to throw a fit,

She wouldn’t accept cookies, so my mom had to find a new way to fix this… 

Reviews

[Emily Paige]

this made me laugh most writeing cant make me laugh it's unique i like it :)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

lol, excellent write, love it

[ashley]

Hahaha! That was so funny! Very cute. Well written, good job.

ahahaha bloody brilliant

[The Wave]

awwe, cute!

i like the story you shared, but i feel the way you wrote it was a tad wordy and you lost the flow of a poem even though you rhymed each line.

overall, this is a great foundation for something amazing. needs some editing or trimming, and this will be a definite WOW. great potential.
good job.

[closed account]

awwwwe!!! What a cute funny story/poem!! that was adorable
thanks so much for my smile!!! :-)

[Jack Force]

love this! very quirky and funny. has lifted my spirits!

[BABSIE BEE]

Haaaaa. Could so easily happen of course. Written with fun in mind. Thanks for share.
Babsie Bee xx

[Alicante lullaby]

fun reading it,did this really happened,,,,haha,,

[Tessah]

Haha this is so great!!