My Sister and Her Cookies

 When my sister was younger, she was famous for throwing fits,

                                 My mom would always cure them, by baking cookies with chocolate chips,

My sister would eat these cookies, for breakfast snacks and lunch,

Sometimes she would save them, so she could eat them all at once…

Then one day we had guests over, I think it was Christmas Eve,

A couple with their two children, and a new puppy named Steve,

The dog observed my sister, eating cookies on the floor,

Every time she finished one she’d ask for one more,

She was always very messy and left crumbs on the ground,

She ate every one of them, every one she found,

It was then that she saw the biggest chocolate chip,

And couldn’t wait to eat it as she brought it to her lips,

Once it was in her mouth, it was then that she realized,

That the dog that was right next to her had left a little surprise,

Certain it was chocolate, she did not notice it was a t**d,

Shocked by the taste and texture, she couldn’t say a word,

And as her eyes filled with tears, she started to throw a fit,

She wouldn’t accept cookies, so my mom had to find a new way to fix this… 

Reviews

[Bubo]

Very good rhyming, and a lesson to be learnt in there! Really enjoyable witty piece!

[Sasha]

From the moment you mentioned this particular chip being larger than the rest, I said, "Oh no..." Serves her right, though. :P
This was short and clever as promised by your profile. I look forward to seeing what else you have to offer.

[J.Black]

LOL! This was incredibly cute and funny!

[Livenrite]

Lmao!!! I never enjoyed reading a poem so much in my life!! Very cute and funny:) Thanks for sharing!

[Doreen]

Hysterical! This is a very cute write. I just hope it's not a true story! :)

[Gandré]

This was a cute doggerel, ah.. those memories... great ability to throw your literary joke into the bone marrow.

[Tommy]

A little girl asks a little boy, "Whatch you doin," He replies, "Eatin Chocolate." She says, "Whered you gettit." He says, "The doggie dropped it." LOL I wouldn't each cookies anymore either.

Nice piece!
RLG,
Tommy

[A.Lee]

LOL that's hilarious. Well written. I love the rhyme and sing-song style it has.

[just rose.]

OMG. Lol. Love how you express this in couplet rhyme, it is so very like a brother (I have three) to recount such incidents with a certain unbridled glee ... wonderful!

[la Abeja]

Oh Goodness that was HI-LAR-I-OUS
This is one of, if not the funniest things I've ever read on this site. You are a masterful story teller. Thanks for sharing.