My Sister and Her Cookies

 When my sister was younger, she was famous for throwing fits,

                                 My mom would always cure them, by baking cookies with chocolate chips,

My sister would eat these cookies, for breakfast snacks and lunch,

Sometimes she would save them, so she could eat them all at once…

Then one day we had guests over, I think it was Christmas Eve,

A couple with their two children, and a new puppy named Steve,

The dog observed my sister, eating cookies on the floor,

Every time she finished one she’d ask for one more,

She was always very messy and left crumbs on the ground,

She ate every one of them, every one she found,

It was then that she saw the biggest chocolate chip,

And couldn’t wait to eat it as she brought it to her lips,

Once it was in her mouth, it was then that she realized,

That the dog that was right next to her had left a little surprise,

Certain it was chocolate, she did not notice it was a t**d,

Shocked by the taste and texture, she couldn’t say a word,

And as her eyes filled with tears, she started to throw a fit,

She wouldn’t accept cookies, so my mom had to find a new way to fix this… 

Reviews

[J.Black]

9 months ago, I thought this was cute and funny- and 9 months later, I still think the same! :)

[Meher Saigol]

very entertaining! :)) this is a great one for kids to read :)

[Sunni Davis]

I needed a laugh today and this provided it. Very funny and slightly disgusting. I loved it!

[Cherrie Palmer]

lol oh that is so wrong on so many levels lol
great use of rhyme and flow, to funny and just a little sick

[Kelz]

am lost for words.................:)

[Chelsea]

Says your new, so welcome to the cafe!
I enjoyed reading this poem, I for sure cracked a smile! I can just picture this little kid's face after she eats the dog's present!! Probably priceless! Guess it cured her little chocolate fix!
It reminds me of my little nephew, whose only four years old. He was walking and bailed into a pile cow poo!! haha
You write really well, humorous stories!

[imawriter]

i laughed my butt off.. This is great!

[brianna vega]

love this hahaha

[Alex Zynder]

This is a great poem, i love the heart behind it. You can feel it the entire way through

[stellasautelle]

cute :)