The Lady On The Bench

 How to describe one of the most beautiful things I’ve seen,

                                                     A pregnant lady on a bench who is as sweet as can be,

She would always smile, wave, and greet any old stranger,

She feared not a thing, and didn’t believe in danger,

So I asked her one-day “how is it that you are so full of love?”

And she responded, “I’m not really sure, but that I have a lot of”,

This puzzled me for months until the day I discovered,

The lady had triplets; she was a proud new mother,

Thinking back when she was pregnant, I finally understood,

Because four hearts love more, than any one could… 

Reviews

[Livenrite]

Woooooooooowww! I love your style and you are very creative. Keep it up! Thanks for sharing:)

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

This is absolutely the sweetest thing! Very sweet, indeed.

~True

[ByTheWay]

the closing line is really what captures me in this poem, very well revealed =]

[Doreen]

This is so short, and yet so very sweet. Nice write!

[A.Lee]

Aww, cute. Mothers always have more love :)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is a beautiful piece, love it

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a beautiful poem and I love the last line. Short and to the point. The flow is like magic. very well written

[heido]

This is so cute.
And so incredibly thoughtful.

[closed account]

okkkk, this was so endearing, pregnant women are beautiful
and it's so warming to read that from a man!!

[Somewhere]

Very nice. Well done, that does explain the glow that a pregnant woman has doesn't it. Excellent ending!