Darling Fair

Darling Fair

A Poem by Ethan

Darling fair, with bright and golden hair,

If you were mortal, I would never know.

A perfect, fallen angel you must be.

 

So, you heav’nly cherub; please stay true.

For though you often tell me you are mine,

I tend to forget it a lot of the time.

© 2017 Ethan


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If here reviews could be a single word,
My single word for this would then be: WOW!

Well done!!
(For sound purposes, I'd suggest to move "often" to before "tell me" rather than leave it after.....and I was going to say something about the last line being a bit wonky in regards to the musicality, but the way the musicality flows, I can say it kind of works.... veering from the set rhythm to end in style and the bang that is the line!)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emipoemi

7 Years Ago

not at all. It's reads perfectly. You just need to remember to breathe in between "it" and "a" to re.. read more
Ethan

7 Years Ago

Oh okay, thank you very much :)
emipoemi

7 Years Ago

always with pleasure.



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Goodness, where do you come up with this stuff? It's awesome! The way you described your darling and compared her to a fallen angel, well, that' new for me. To sum it up, one word - wow!

Love,
Vasilees.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ethan

7 Years Ago

Thanks :))
Your poems for some reason make me feel nostalgic for some reason. Its as if i'm reaching out to my past life or something. It seems as if the narrator is deeply infatuated with this "darling fair"while she isn't. She makes him feel as if she isn't his sometimes which must be painful! So we side with the narrator. There is a lot of pathos in the poem yet you didn't paint it so explicitly. Well done! Truly... amazing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ethan

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
An interesting read Ethan. Not so sure it is as romantic as some see it. More tongue in cheek? As always you structure your pieces well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Simply amazing...I liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Gee
Tis sweet Ethan, the sort of sweet that wins a lady's heart.
Good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ethan

7 Years Ago

Well, thank you
It's so beautifully penned..I liked it a lot.. it's totally amazing..thnx for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ethan

7 Years Ago

Thank you-
Sofia

7 Years Ago

Pleasure! :)
Ethan, this is amazing!!! :D If you have a girlfriend, read this to her!! If not, save it for the special lady you meet one day. Or special dude, however you choose. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Raven Moonchild

7 Years Ago

Then change it to dark hair. lol
Ethan

7 Years Ago

It's throw off the meter😂 Regardless, thanks
Raven Moonchild

7 Years Ago

lol Sorry. Well, look up different shades of brown and see which one works best. :)
really sweet poem, nice work Ethan.
like a bit of old world romance and a touch of magic

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

7 Years Ago

Thanks ana :)
Papaya

7 Years Ago

no problem
Aahhhh perfect you won me any angel poem I love but yours is special

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I like angels too :)

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