Goodnight

My first haiku...

Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

[Ethan]

Thanks you!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Lovely sweet pure I love it

[Ethan]

Thank you :)))

[Mr.Writer]

Such a dreamy, sensational and beautiful haiku Ethan!
Well done my friend, keep it up!

[Ethan]

Thank you man

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Perfect Haiku and adorable idea! Lovely imagery Yes, I guess he needs his sleep!

[Ethan]

Thanks :) Always nice to hear from you Annette

[pia]

This was a really nice haiku. You made the sky feel like home to a Deity or a supernatural Being. When the lights are shut. He must be sleeping. Leaving the world to itself. Nicely penned.

[Ethan]

Thank you very much :P

[Damien Ridge]

Good haiku, and it's your first one. It makes multiple scenarios play out in my head so well done! Thanks for sharing.

[Ethan]

Thanks Damien :)