Goodnight

My first haiku...

Stars have been turned off.

The night sky is cold and black.

God must be sleeping.

Reviews

[L.C. Jarrette]

nice haiku there ethan. since haiku is short, some may think it's pretty easy to compose, well i'm not sure about that...how you have to compress everything into a 17 syllable poem and convey the message through implication and expression of allusion . a poem written in this form is very difficult for me. good job!

[Ethan]

Thanks you!

[Shineheemi]

simple but has a deep meaning for me. i like this piece. thank you. :)

[Manel]

few words a lot of meaning nice haiku Ethan
thank you for sharing

[Poetic License]

Positively outstanding. Bravo!

[Giulia King]

Perfect!!! So much meaning in just a few short words. Amazing

[ROXANE DORSEY]

very very nicely written thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.

[Tabby Mac]

Well done! I love how versatile you are with your writing! Love this piece! Tabby

[CarlyFlower]

Who will watch us at night?

[Zeldablue]

I love it! Very good for your first Haiku.

[Ethan]

Thanks Zeldablue

[Alexzandera]

Short and simple but also elegant and fascinating!

[Ethan]

Thanks!!!!

[A.K. Rohner]

Good job. Short and sweet, just how I like 'em.

[Ethan]

Hahaha thanks