Love Since The Start

At first our friendship was like this,

We both hated each other so much

 

Somehow we became great friends,

That's when the spark secretly came

 

Now before I go,

 

Rememeber the first time we sat under that tree,

We were so happy

 

You were like romeo

I was juliet

 

Oh well,

Now I'm far from the place we met

 

So obviously we both moved on

 

Do you remember

 

The first time we sat under that tree

Hanging out with all our friends

 

We were so happy

 

Your eyes sparkled when you looked at me

Your beautiful brown eyes always made me happy

 

I was Juliet

You were my romeo

 

Both forbidden to love

 

Oh well,

 

I guess even the greates love of two bestfriends,

Eventually comes to an end

 

I had to go one day,

I saw the look on your face

 

When you saw me leave

 

I promised myself that day,

That one day I'll return

 

And I still hope you'll wait for me

Sitting under that same maple tree.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The great lovers of the past always die or are left to write great stories. The Juliets and Beatrices are the muses for 700 years now. I like the poem. A kind and sweet story. Need a better ending. Funny how we return to old places trying to remember the pleasures of past times. A beautiful poem.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was a really cute and sweet write. Good job on this poem. I thought this was a cute little romantic tale. I love the last line. Thanks for sharing. :D

a delightful piece! i enjoyed reading this! i believe i can relate to this. :)

[Red Crown]

I think every lovers should be best friends, unfortunately not everyone thinks like that eh ?

[David W Moore III]

but you can never go back, it is never the same and the tree grows on and is hardly recognizable. but, sometimes if it is fated, something new will be under thqat tree, with the same person or someone else...

[Jonathan De Elvira]

At first our friendship was like this,

We both hated each other so much



Somehow we became great friends,

That's when the spark secretly came

.......since that line I already know that this was gonna be a good and cute poem, not to mention that it's sad....

I like the idea of having a good best friend and then eventually fall in love to him/her but never got a chance to really be in love with....touching...
good poem..

[My Fair Lady]

How tender, matters of the heart and love that we maybe could have had.. but somehow let slip away. I like that you put Oh well.. but didn't really mean it. It was like you said it, but didn't really think it. The thought was really about the hope of the love waiting.

[Matthew Kult]

Beautiful write. I hope he is there waiting too...would be a beautiful love story.

with love,

Jaidyn

[silver threaded queen]

beautiful poem. I loved this.
x's and o's

[Kelley]

True love last a life time.

Great poem thanks for sharing.

Kelley