Princess Emyli ~Part I

Princess Emyli ~Part I

A Story by Atheana Kylee-S. C.
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A story about a teenage emo girl named Esmi.She is very quiet, sacarstic, and she hates almost everyone. Every since her mother left London, Esmi has been having this strange dreams about a weird past

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Walking down the path the beautiful young girl could see through the web of lies. The strings held the girl up, as she tried to walk on her own. The strings pulled back hard, not allowing her to move. The strings moved and they made the girl fall into a deep whole. Then the strings were cut loose but this mysterious shadow. The girl fell, and fell into what seemed like a never ending whole of darkness. 

  

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My heart was beating so fast when I woke up.  I screamed a bit, trying not to wake anyone. Edward walked into the room.

 

'Are you okay Esmi?' 

Edward (my boyfriend) said.

 

He kissed my forehead.

 

'I had such a terrible nightmare...'

 

Edward smirked and hugged me.

 

'Don't worry it was just a dream. And... I'll always be here to protect you.'

And with that he walked back to his room.

 

It all seemed so real..

 

 

Tears began falling down my cheek. I wiped my tears and got out of bed. I quietly opened the door, and tip toed into the hallway. I made my way down the stairwell. I went into the living room, and sat alone on the couch. 

 

Why does this girl keep appearing in my dreams? I don't ever remember meeting a girl like her... I mean, I know everyone in London.. Maybe, I should call mother and talk to her...

 

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Atheana Kylee-S. C.


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This I found interesting and you did an awesome job with quotations I just love it! Because most people have trouble with the quotations, but you managed to do it perfectly not to mention the description I mean the "Tears began to fall down my cheek" And it's really interesting how you did it to. Nicely done I can't wait to read the rest!!

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This I found interesting and you did an awesome job with quotations I just love it! Because most people have trouble with the quotations, but you managed to do it perfectly not to mention the description I mean the "Tears began to fall down my cheek" And it's really interesting how you did it to. Nicely done I can't wait to read the rest!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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