Fantasy

Fantasy

A Story by Atheana Kylee-S. C.
"

My fantasy story.

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We both make a wish. As the shooting star passes by. I look into your eyes. I see more than just two brown eyes. I can see the stars in the sky. I could see you staring back at me. I looked up at the sky and you said

 

'I want to give you something.'

 

 I looked at you and you had a small box in your hands. You place it on my lap and said

 

'This is for you.'

 

You smiled and I said

 

'I'll open it later.'

 

You hugged me and you walked home. I looked down at the box and as I opened it I gasped and felt such joy inside. It was a diamond ring, and it had a small note inside.

 

It had said

 

'Look up at the sky.'

 

 I saw a message written in the stars what was written was:

 

'I know that you don't believe in love, but I love you. I mean it and I always will.Will you find it in your heart to marry me?'

 

I cried when I finished reading it. It was a dream come true. I had found love even when I thought it did not exist. I put on the ring and then out of nowhere you came and hugged me.

 

'I will always love you.'

 

 Is what I heard you say.

 

 

© 2010 Atheana Kylee-S. C.


Author's Note

Atheana Kylee-S. C.
I know I said that I won't write about love anymore... but this came to my mind today and I thought it was a nice little story. Thanks if you read this, comment and tell me what you think. Hope you enjoy it! (:

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Very nicely done. Great job

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Without love we would be just robots. We will lose many till one day we may get lucky and be content. A beautiful story. The token of love are worth so much later in a life. Proof we have loved and laugh once. A outstanding story. Thank you.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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