The Love of Friends

The Love of Friends

A Poem by Atheana Kylee-S. C.

You were sad because they were sad

I asked what was wrong

And you said

'Some of my friends are sad. And one of them gave up on me.'

 

I became sad because I don't like it

When others mess with my friends

 

I just wish I could help

But I know that she can't be this way

She just can't be this way forever

 

Never do I want to hear that

Someone has hurt one of my friends

 

She felt like crying

She got depressed

 

I'm mad at those people

Who made her want to cry

She's like my sister

If you hurt her

I'll hurt YOU

 

It's not fair

The good people always get hurt

Things always get taken away from good people

 

The bad people take things from us

When we've done nothing wrong

I hate it when someone hurts another

 

I would even hate if my enemy got hurt

Strange but true

 

When you cry

I will cry

When you need a friend

I'll be there for you

When you need advice

I'll give it to you

When someone hurts you

I'll hurt them

 

'Cause I know

That you'd do the same for me

It's what best friends are for

 

When you cut yourself

I'll try to help you stop

When you laugh

I'll laugh

When you smile

My heart fills with joy

 

I love my friends

 

I will be there for you

I'll try to help you

 

But you at least have to try

To help me out too

 

I draw pictures for you

You sometimes like them

 

I like that you're honest

And you can keep any one of

The many secrets that I have

I like that you're willing to listen

When I tell you how I feel

 

I like how make me laugh

I love it when we hang out

We both have had rough times

But we always end up

The bestest of friends

Than we were before

 

I like how you tell me

How I changed

I like how you stay the same

I love how your stories are great

We might not have been talking lately

But you're still a great friend to me

 

We all laugh

We all play

We spend the whole day

Having fun, and hanging out

 

The most randomest moments happen

Only when I'm with you.

 

[Written for my friends that I love. Also from my great friends from school. Hope others enjoy reading this.]

© 2010 Atheana Kylee-S. C.


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I loved the flow of the words. The love of friends in this poem just makes me cry. It's just like one of my best friends that just keeps me into their hearts. They have my back and I love them for dear life. It expresses the way you stand up for those best friends that will always be with you. I loved it! ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This was a good poem. It was really sweet and cute. I have a friend like that and she will always be there for me. I will always be there for her. I will always be there for my friends to. Even if they aren't always there for me. I would always try to help them. I hope your friendship lasts forever. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this so much! Amzing!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

excellent

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very beautiful poem.. You are correct. A real friend will stand in dark or light with their good friend. I like the story and the ending. Your words were true and someone would be lucky to have you as a friend. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


nicely done

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A good poem about friendship. True friendships stand the test of time and influence of other people. Your friends are fortunate to have you.
When you cry
I will cry
When you need a friend
I'll be there for you
When you need advice
I'll give it to you
When someone hurts you
I'll hurt them
The best stanza of this poem... Nicely done

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was pretty good. The love for friends can be strong one and its always good to have friends.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the flow of the words. The love of friends in this poem just makes me cry. It's just like one of my best friends that just keeps me into their hearts. They have my back and I love them for dear life. It expresses the way you stand up for those best friends that will always be with you. I loved it! ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, very beautiful, i love it awesome

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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