EVIL

EVIL

A Poem by Atheana Kylee-S. C.

The master watches as people die

While working outside in the fields

He laughs, as another person dies

That man was truely evil

 

 

Many people just throw

Paper, and many other things on the floor

As the dirt piles up

Our earth has become more dirty

People who do this, are evil

 

 

When you think you are in love

You dream about the boy you love

Everynight, and you think you are in love

Then he meets someone far more beautiful

Than you will ever be and he leaves you for her

That makes you think that, that same boy

You 'fell in love' with is evil

 

Mean, nasty people

Take children away

Right out of their own homes

And sometimes those children

Are never found, sometimes they are

Found only dead

Those rapeists, stalkers, and nasty people

Are truely evil

 

What have us humans done to earth so far?

How far will we go?

When well the evilness end?

Why doesn't God spare the lifes of those 'lost' children?

 

If you care about;

Yourself

Your family

Your friends

And those around you

 

Please stop those evil things that you do.

 

Have you realized the true evilness, within you?

© 2010 Atheana Kylee-S. C.


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This is good and it is true that there are evil people in the world, but there are good people in the world too. The negatives and the positives mash with each other. Thanks for sharing though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I believe the world will always have bad people. That is why all children must learn how to defend themselves. 99 per cent of the world is good. We rarely hear of the man or woman who donate food and money to the poor. I heard from a Mike Tyson interview. He had no money to bury his daughter who died. The community he lived in gave him $300,000 for his daughter funeral cost. This happen often in this world. Good people showing concern for others. I told my children to be careful and truth must be earned. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a very evil man. I really think it's soo sad but, you put your words to great use. Please keep writing because it's a great poem. ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww this is sad........ great job! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow amazing and so true. Ive been one of those kids who faced abused. So yeah they are very evil people. great poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sure you can add it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, very true, i have evils I must destroy, aweosme would you mind me adding this to my favs? Im really sorry if you dont want me too

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Atheana Kylee-S. C.

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