Unknown Friendship

this to a VERY special friend who has been so nice, funny, and sweet to me...

 

How can you describe...

A friend who wouldn't give up on you..

When you wanted to die..

He tried to save you..

And it worked...

 

 

How can you not see...

How good he is to me?

He told me....

"You're awesome...

No other person I know is like you..

You are funny, nice, and you are my bestfriend."

 

 

I ignored what he said, and I took advantage of his kindness..

Then one day... (which happened to be today)..

He finally gave up on me...

He wouldn't message me anymore...

He wouldn't talk to me..

 

I lost the golden axe...

I lost a very good friend...

 

And now I see...

Why he cared so much...

 

I have seen the truth...

Behind his light green eyes...

 

Now I know, that I should have valued our friendship...

And I hope, my friend will somehow read this.

 

 

Reviews

[Kiba-chan]

the first three and last three stanzas dont seem to match in flow or structure. Dispite that i think this is a wonderful poem

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, very beautiful, if this is true, well, God might have a plan for you and him, idk

[Daydreamer54]

Well go make up! tell him ur sry and you'll never take him for granted again! Those type iof friendships we have to value. This was a nice poem though and I can feel the emotion of regret.

[nono]

Very nice i liked it...it's cute...sometimes your real friends are the ones who you think aren't but they'er the one that's always there no matter what. Love this very nice