Breathless

Breathless

A Poem by Liz
"

This will always be meant for the person who inspired me to write this. No matter what happens.

"
One of my greatest wishes is to tell you 
million beautiful things trying to explain to 
you and make sense of why i'm fascinated 
by your presence. 


But to tell you the truth, 
I can't and never will be able to. 
Because the most beautiful things in life;
take your breath away.

© 2010 Liz


Author's Note

Liz
Short & sweet (:

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I loved this! I thought it was really cute, and captured the passion and excitement of young love in such a simple way. I found the font changes to be a little bit distracting, but other than that, I thought this was great! I could definitely relate to the emotions behind this piece, and I thought that you expressed them beautifully. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I loved this! I thought it was really cute, and captured the passion and excitement of young love in such a simple way. I found the font changes to be a little bit distracting, but other than that, I thought this was great! I could definitely relate to the emotions behind this piece, and I thought that you expressed them beautifully. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and Sweet describes it well. 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 8, 2010
Last Updated on September 2, 2010
Tags: love, romance

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Liz
Liz

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I'm Elizabeth I'm 18 years old and life is good ♥ I'm in love with the most amazing man ever; We said "I do" on August 26th, 2011 ♥ Simplicity and love is what pulses through.. more..

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