Love

Love is a beautiful treasure hidden deep inside your heart

every once in a while it will seek out and express itself  to others

sometimes without your permission

but don't get angry love spreads on its own but you do have some control

Love can spead places and you don't even realize it but soon you will come around

Love is beautiful but sometimes hate can take over  it’s wonderful place

Reviews

[Lizardo]

you really got me hooked, i really like it
''Love is beautiful but sometimes hate can take over it's wonder place''
That's the beautiful truth.
it was wonderfull to read it

[Chloe Grant]

I think this is great! You've captured the reader. Some stuff i would suggest is grammar and a few more periods breaking up sentences. I think it would add more of an effect to the poem. Overall, this is awesome! Keep writing.

[estherlove43]

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it!!