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Creeper poem about this beautiful girl at my school. I'm bi, leave me alone! xD

What would you say if I told you
The most beautiful girl ever born
Was one I could see almost daily,
Though her heart simply seems to be torn?

I don't know her too well, I'll admit it
But whenever I see her, she seems
To be silently making her journey
To my mind, where she'll live in my dreams.

She is perfect and gorgeous and lovely
I would love to lie naked with her
And though I long for her every day, see,
I am one she would discard for sure.

Reviews

[fati]

Nice. She should feel honored to have this poem written about her. Actually, I don't think you would be discarded if she read this. Very nice piece. I like the simplicity of it yet the strong impact it leaves. I enjoyed it. I look forward to reading your other pieces.