Mediocrity

Mediocrity

A Poem by Esteban Morfín
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The forever fight

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We all know the struggle
We all know it's smell
That nasty mud puddle
That personal hell

It takes away the best
It likes to kill dreams
Constantly putting to test
All hers and hims

It keeps dragging you down
Tackling you to the ground
Chasing you like a hound
There is no way around
There is no known cure
No way to send it away
It's always there for sure
Blocking everyone's way

Most people accept it
They end up liking the dirt
They fit to it's fit
They get used to quit

Only some learn to fight
And never give up their liberty
They fight till they're stronger
Stronger than mediocrity
It's not easy, not easy at all
But that's the only real strife
Everything else is a fraud
Don't live a fraud, live a life.

© 2022 Esteban Morfín


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Btw if you are anxious about rhyming life with life, you can use "That's the only real strife"...
I'm not a fan of rhyming to be honest. I started off with them, but they started making my poetry sound forced so now I've all but given them up.
I love the first stanza!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Esteban Morfín

4 Years Ago

I agree! Rhyming makes it very forced some times. I like the challenge, tho. But I shall try to make.. read more



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Any rhyme is fine as long as the flow is maintained, so life is not a problem, only mediocrity.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Btw if you are anxious about rhyming life with life, you can use "That's the only real strife"...
I'm not a fan of rhyming to be honest. I started off with them, but they started making my poetry sound forced so now I've all but given them up.
I love the first stanza!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Esteban Morfín

4 Years Ago

I agree! Rhyming makes it very forced some times. I like the challenge, tho. But I shall try to make.. read more

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Added on July 15, 2020
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Esteban Morfín
Esteban Morfín

México, Estado de México, Mexico



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Hello there! My name is Esteban. I am a Mexican young man with a passion for writing. In the long term, I want to dedicate full-time to writing. I've been writing short stories and novels pretty.. more..

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