Llego El Amor

another random love poem the title is in Spanish ^_^

 

Come Love,

Let the embers spark,

and the passion run through your veins.

Feel the burn within your body,

as the fire overwhelms.

Your touch,

so warm.

To heat my icy chill.

A perfect mixture,

for calm watters.

Come, Love.

Let our eyes meet,

and the stars within twinkle.

Eye to eye,

the flood gates begin to open.

As the emotion rushes through.

Happieness.

Nothing else,

In this universe is nearly as powerful.

Come love

Lay your powerful body,

in the sand next to mine.

So that we may soak,

in the rays if the cosmic sun.

Solar power,

our passion.

Come love.

Into my arms,

so that I can hold you.

And wake,

Upon that mysterious smile,

For all eternity.

Reviews

[John McGrael]

this is a super cool poem!! i really like the imagery, and the last lines,
"Come love.
Into my arms,
so that I can hold you.
And wake,
Upon that mysterious smile,
For all eternity."

i like how you used the word 'mysterious', thats a word i would have never thought to use in this context, but i like the picture it paints!


i think you some typos though... in the 4th line...

"Fell the burn withing your body,"

i think it should be...: "feel the burn within your body"

[shinybluestars03]

Awesome poem
enjoyed every part of it.
"Llego el amor" i think the right translation
for that is Love has come but either way i enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes