Stringy Puke

Stringy Puke

A Poem by Last Lying Look

step forwards
step back
always ready
to attack

sink low
to the floor
we always knew
you were a w***e

so swim
the other way
but i'll kill you
some day


just loose
your mind
it's amazing
what you'll find

now strike
right back
we're always ready
to attack

© 2008 Last Lying Look


Author's Note

Last Lying Look
little tune that somehow swam into my head

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:D,, ! Your so talented al lyou r poems make me smile, even when they are as random as hell! I love how your writng is so nicely flowing I LVOE IT!,,

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. I randomly saw this on the main page, and clicked cause of the title...Lol. Random as Hell. Weird, but cool. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 22, 2008

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Last Lying Look
Last Lying Look

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