Toxic Prince

Your lips burn

Whether it be night or day

Oh my Toxic Prince

You know I wouldn't want it any other way

 

So come on

Mr. Masquerade

Put on your mask that fools all

This was the reason you were made

 

You are awaiting my death

I hope you die young too

My lost and lonely love

Because I'm scared to death of you

 

You're breathing Poison into my air

Ruler of acid rain

Our love is dripping

Dripping down the Drain

Reviews

[Meredith Leigh]

I thought this was really neat and creative.
The title itself drew me in.
It had that dark feel to it that can appeal to basically
anyone.
I liked this part:

'So come on

Mr.Mascerade

Put on your mask that fools all

This was the reason you were made'

thought that was cool. Anyways awesome work!

- Kriss

[An Ordinary Woman]

I agree with ape, it is freakin awesome!

The last stanza is the total bomb, I love it!

Your breathing Poison into my air
Ruler of acid rain
Our love is dripping
Down the Drain

And thank you for the kind review of my poem. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

[ape domenigoni]

freakin awesome...good work.