Slaughter Queen

 

 

Lonely is just an opinion

Made by those who aren't adapted to the blood of fun

Those who can't rise the dead dogs from their graves

To come out and play

 

So everyone drink for your murdering queen

Bow down to be sentenced to death by her claws

Don't beg for mercy because then she'll kill them all

Bow down darling

 

Dead dance for our slaughter queen

Don't show fear at the dinner table

She'll eat you alive

Don't cower down or you'll die weak and alone

 

Wipe away your pathetic selfish tears

Die with some dignity you fool

Stand up to die

Stand up and die

Author's Note

I realized after writing this that it kind of reminds me of the character Betty Sue from the book Whisper of Death by Christopher pike. Not my intention. Oh well. Enjoy.

Reviews

[siri]

okay okay okay before i elaborate on ur intriguing (i think thats how you spell it) poem I want to boldly mention....
so i may get your attention...
that you deffinetly....
deserve....
a....(its almost coming!!!! i promise)
really...
friggin...
awesome...
mother...
f****n...(excuse the language if thats not ur fancy but its mine so deal with it)
HIGH FIVE!!!!!!
okay now that i got that out of the way(feel special i never put THAT much effort into my virtual high fives...i guess ur just cool huh?) i can start talking about ur delicious poem!
so i pretty much thought it was awesome and and and its true ill be adding it to my favorites also...
you must become my new friend cuz i think ur mind will deffinetly be something i will adore...
oh im sorry i could go into detail about how much i like ur poem but then i would feel like that wouldnt like um show off my dorky wierd personality which is something i want to emphasize.....oh snap i am totally starting to rant now talk to u in the near future my friend

Siri

[Queen of wands]

The presentation of this piece interested me. Squinting at the words Immediately forced me into the emotion being conveyed. It also slows the pace of the read which left me with a perspective I would not have otherwise had. Obviously, this piece is heartbreaking in its message. I think the use of the word "rise" is interesting as it brings to mind an image of the word raise in a way that gives the reader a feel of being raised by a wicked witch. There is much impressive talent radiating in this dark, sad peace.

[Tony Hwilka]

A good write,and your right lonely is only a opinion. If you are your best friend there is no such thing as lonely. There is alone, quite different and sometimes the most peaseful.

[ape domenigoni]

I love Christopher Pike. And this poem is wicked...

[fireblossom]

wow...so refreshing to read something pure. i love the pose. well written you bad girl.

[paradoxical]

I likey. These are more like song lyrics, no? Awesome, none the less. But then again I like morbid things.

P.S. Christopher Pike wrote one of my oldest, most favorite books; "The Monster."