The Wolf and The Girl

Twilight characters mixed with old story i once heard

Isabella Swan of the town of forks went for a walk one day. Curiously, she wondered into the forest despite the warning about the wolves. She had been forbidden to go there. But still she did.

 

It was quite a chilly day so she had on nice big coat that her love Edward had given to her to keep her from freezing. Isabella was soon lead deep into the forest, fascinated by one little wonder to the next, to the point where the sun was setting and she could no longer find her way home.

Trying not to get anymore lost she lay down under a tree and curled up for the night.

 

She awoke the next morning, half frozen and not even sure which way she had come. So she just sat. Sat under that tree. Waiting. For her love and his family were gone for a couple of days, so she was stranded until she found her way out or was found.

 

Out of the trees came a huge creature. A wolf. Isabella could tell it meant no harm and was not frightened of it. He came over to her and she began to pet him. Noticing how cold she was, the wold lay down beside her and curled around her in attempt to keep her warm and that was how they fell asleep.

 

The next day when her love and his family returned home they found that she was not there.

So they sent Edward and the other four youngest and fastest on horse back to find her. Riding into they woods they picked up her scent. Going as fast as they could they found her. Seeing the wolf so close to her; their natural enemy, so close to Isabella asleep and defenceless, he automatically thought he meant her harm. Swiftly he whipped out his rifle and her love Edward shot the wolf. Isabella shot up, shocked and realized what had happened. And began to cry for the poor misunderstood wolf.

Author's Note

twilight characters mixed with an old story i once heard. written an EXTREMELY long time ago. I don't even rememver writign it but I found it on the floor in my closet. sooo yeah.
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Reviews

[Anthony]

Nice Write. I agree with Kriss. It probably would work with your own characters.

[Meredith Leigh]

I remember this, but I liked it.
I think it's got a sad, ark, but beautiful meaning behind it.
Wonderful write!

- Kriss

[Jocelyn Elizabeth]

This is a cute story. I think using yout own characters would work also. There are too many connotations that come to mind with the characters of Twilight. You could also extend this, which would be fun. Adding more descriptions and whatnot. I did enjoy this, and think it can be a reflection into a lot of situations.

Thanks for sharing.
Jocelyn

[Robyn]

That's an interesting twist, vampires riding horses. Poor Jacob though. There were a couple of little grammar and spelling mistakes (Forks should be capitalized, and you wrote wold instead of wolf in the fourth paragraph). A lovely piece though. Wolves often do have that reputation of being villainous, unjustly so.

[angelina neves]

Very beautiful story... and it is sad because it happens all the time, everywhere, with the most absurd "reasons" invented by the minds of the "saviors"!
I love the way she goes to the "forbiden land" because most of the time it is prejudice that puts the lable to kind of get the "control" over the adventure spirit we all have to look for new things and secrets!
A pleasure to read!