Nose Bleed

off the top of my head... READ IT!

Nose Bleed

 

I remember the first night I hit you

It was amazing

I remember how much you loved it too

 

Your nose bled the most stunning shade of red

It makes me wonder if thats

the colour you blood will be when your dead

 

I think I might cut you open

Just to find out if it really is

the ruby red I'm hope'n

 

Author's Note

Uhmmm.... just off the top of my head.THe hard part was finding a pciture I liked to go with it.

Reviews

[SundusR]

very intense!
strangely attractive...liking it!

[MandarinOranges]

not bad, not bad at all! and you did good with the pic too. i'm guessing, if this is just off the top of your head, that you might be feeling a lil angery towards someone right now. prehaps not. either way i like the structure and ryhming of this poem. not to mention the violence i get from it.

Good Job!!

[Legion]

How disturbing, but what an image.

[Suffer In Silence]

........................
it was good.
it has good potential .
i can feel it, it's just deep down inside !
lol.